I Feel...

 I feel partitioned

honeycombed

like a beehive 

with crawling thoughts 

with wings

i have been known

to hum

 

i am a Japanese house, 

paper thin walls housing

porcelain ideas, 

fragile, delicate

growing 

flower soft

my petals radiating from

central ideas

reflexively collecting 

sun

 

i am a stranded 

playful child

unique in my 

separation

 

i am a hole for

knowledge

pour into me

then up my

rough walls

climb out as 

image

 

Reviews

[Greg Skura]

Wow! This is a very good poem with vivid almost abstract imagery, and beautiful analogy. Well Done! Thank you for sharing!