Violence for the Sake of Violence

Violence for the Sake of Violence

A Poem by 水希

Violence for the sake of violence

Hands always closed

The best way for beating

Before I know it, I'm consumed

My mind fades to black

And I awaken to crimson

I've become a spitting image

Of the one I hate the most

It's all his fault that life is unfair

Never feeling the warmth

Never feeling a caring hand

And I'm the bad guy

Everyone always sees the surface

No one sees the torment

When in the deepest depths

I waited for the blunt force

I was braced for it

What hurt most

Was the open hand

The soft comfort

And I was unravelled

Left bare for all to see

All including me

What years of torrents

Raging seas

And violence for the sake of violence

Had done to me

© 2016 水希


Author's Note

水希
Probably one of the most touchy topics I've done. Let me know what you think.

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What's more frightening than the violence is the fact that you've become the spitting image. Violence begets violence....never truer than here

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

水希

9 Years Ago

This was actually written based on the psychological effects of child abuse on the child and how it .. read more

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Added on July 1, 2014
Last Updated on April 28, 2016
Tags: Abuse, child abuse, love, son, little boy, lost, Btoom, violence, influence

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Hello, I guess. I'm 19. I write mostly dark and deep poetry, but I'm not averse to other genres. Reviews are cool. I take criticism well. I don't mind talking to others, so that's okay too. I like art.. more..

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