Social Media

Social Media

A Poem by 水希
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Today's Facebook experience in a poem

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Bullets and guns, holocaust puns
Hypocrisy and idiocy
People want to fight
Cutting off their family
Doing drugs and posting mugs
And still think they're doing right
Politics, ugly chicks
Kitty cats and turtle pics
Songs that don't make sense
Pictures showing chest
Because they're like totally cooler than the rest
This world is so messed up
All their mouths are foul
I'm done with the internet for now.

© 2014 水希


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Facebook Blows..................................

Posted 9 Years Ago


it's great you wrote this on the internet. seriously. that's what did it for me.


Posted 9 Years Ago


The Twin Arenas

9 Years Ago

i know that's pretty obvious. I'll review something else. I feel like a dope.
Hello there!

Wow, you have summarized social media in a nutshell! Something that could be used to keep people in touch with each other has become a way for teens to achieve their fifteen minutes of "fame." I especially like your lines:

"Pictures showing chest
Because they're like totally cooler than the rest"

I can hear my mental voice take on such a mocking tone as a I read it--awesome job! I smiled (let's be honest, it was a smirk) when I read it. It reminded me of all the good the occasional friend-list purge does...

Thank you for sharing this!
~MusicManiac



Posted 9 Years Ago



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Hello, I guess. I'm 19. I write mostly dark and deep poetry, but I'm not averse to other genres. Reviews are cool. I take criticism well. I don't mind talking to others, so that's okay too. I like art.. more..

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