Fire

Fire

A Poem by Maddi


The flames devour, smoke billows, wood falls.
The nearby garden fence,
Looks tense.

© 2016 Maddi



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thankyou for this
i felt the fear of that garden fence in this short swift poem about fire approaching it
thanks for entry into my 5 lines and under comp good luck

Posted 1 Month Ago


Maddi

1 Month Ago

thank you very much
Haha! Was not expecting that, I like it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


I really like this one Maddi. Short sharp with a great ending.
Well done. Quite funny and subtle.
Alan
Would you like to have a look at my short poem 'Prejudice'?
Thanks, Alan

Posted 2 Years Ago



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Maddi
Maddi

The oak tree by the pond with the coy fish, Norfolk, United Kingdom



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I LOVE writing and reading poems, reading books and some fanfiction too! All literature is accepted by me! I'm also a cynical, sarcastic and rude person, but those who get to know me, love me for it. .. more..

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