Stress.

The world is turning quicker
she can't keep it all in
her mom is losing her job,
a good chunk of money
they need.

She's losing her breath
being stressed about boys,
she only wants one
not the two that
like her.

Her arms losing feeling
why can't it just be fixed
by now? There's so much
to worry about,
will she lose complete
feeling?

The big day to find out what's
wrong is coming up,
but she's already
too dang stressed.

There's way too much
on her mind.

Reviews

[Crystal Marie Dreier]

Wow this poem is so full of emotion!

[Captain]

Honestly, I think you could do better by descibing the situation more so than just stating it flat out. Play with you wording more in the future, see what you come up with.
'Captain

[Victoria Elizabeth]

Wow is all i have to say. I could have seriously thought you were in my mind!!!! Awesome poem!!!!

[Amanda]

very well expressed

[Im a reel vamp lover]

good i like it

[Ashley Rivers :)]

Ohmygosh, I relate to this a lot. Since I am always stressing over boys.
And we're going through some money issues at the time, but both of my parents has good-paying jobs!
Great job on the poem though, and thanks for making it relatable :)