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Late Night Stalls


A Poem by Rochelle Tyler

 

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As long as your blueprint remains etched
within the frameworks of my brain,
like a million shards of broken glass
embedded between the carpet,
you will be the only existance
between this pen and paper.


*

A bursting sun
                      falls
                              off
                                  the tip of your cigarette,
cradled         naturally                    your
             _so_               _between_        _fingertips.
I BURN with a quick sting of envy
as your lips touch the filter.

 

Inhaling the nicotine that will make it closer
to being apartofyou than I ever was,
or ever could have been.


© 2009 Rochelle Tyler



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Author's Note

Two different intros to something I may work with later. I don\'t usually use that kind of format when displaying my stuff, so let me know what you think of the broken up sentences, and what kind of effect it had on you.
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CONTENT !

Sorry ! I don`t even look at a girl`s photos until I know
her----my point----It is the content that matters.

I think you wrote a nice poem with a quirky message
and it was nicely constructed, but the format does not
matter to me.

You did very well and you rate at 100 %

----- Eagle Cruagh

Posted 7 Months Ago

2 of 2 people found this review constructive.





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