The Wolf

The Wolf

A Poem by Mistaken
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This is a poem about feeling captured or trapped.

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My freedom comes with a price.

My love is returned too fierce.

I am a wolf who wants to run with the pack,

             but is restrained with a chain.

 

Howling in silence I suffer alone.

Anger courses through my veins until I only see red.

I attack the chain with animosity…

The effort only lands me with the tighter constriction of the collar.

            a pain filled whine slips through my muzzle at the suffocation being caused.

 

A twig snaps within the surrounding forest.

Tension fills the air.

My shackles raise; my body tenses

            while a deep growl erupts from between my snarling jaws.

 

A cloaked figure emerges from the shadows.

I lower my body into a crouch.

The person chuckles and dangles something from its hand.

            it sparkles in the air.

 

With a jolt I realize it’s the key to the collar.

I reluctantly get up from my crouch.

As the person just stares…then turns.

           leaving me stranded here within nothing.

© 2010 Mistaken


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Aww.... that is so sad and the end is soooo mean! Beautiful write, i love it. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The fight for freedom seems to be an endless one and often provokes even the kindest people into animalistic frenzies. Nice work on your poetic statement.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful. love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Wow great dsetail and imagery. I like the wolf's point of view. i'm sure we've all felt restrained one time or another. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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