Feather

A feather.

The feather drifted up from the ground
It bounced from one blade of grass to the other
The wind blows each of them together
And softly, they greet one another

 

Artistically, the collide into each other

They form a shape and fly

The feathers formed a majestic dove

And they float above all worry in the sky

 

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

I am not a teacher but might sound like one. This has promise, but you need to cut out some of the tangled words that choke it up.
'The feather floated to the ground and bounced amongst the blades of grass. Blown together, softly greeting. accepting the collision. they form a shape and fly. They float above in the shape of a Dove into the trouble free sky.' Sorry if I was too presumptuous but It is how I saw it. Great idea though...And it was YOURS!

[Bats In The Belfry]

This is adorable...sweet!