Scars

Scars

A Poem by Dark Lady Phoenix

Do you feel each scar I put on my body? Do you feel the pain I feel inside? Each scar I place on my arms  represent each scar you put on my heart. The pain on the outside make's the inside not hurt so bad. I keep thinking you can't hurt me any more and then just when I think we are ok...There ya go and hurt me again. Maybe someday I well give up and just walk away. But today is not that day. I well stand my ground. Tear the flesh from my arms to hide the pain. Because I beleave in you. And the man in you that loves me and our family. And maybe some day the pain well stop for both of us.

© 2010 Dark Lady Phoenix


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I can really feel the pain that you're trying to send across in this poem, especially the despair in the writing.
I really like the line 'Each scar I place on my arms represent each scar you put on my heart.."
It's a very emotion provoking piece

-Maddie

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I can really feel the pain that you're trying to send across in this poem, especially the despair in the writing.
I really like the line 'Each scar I place on my arms represent each scar you put on my heart.."
It's a very emotion provoking piece

-Maddie

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Dark Lady Phoenix
Dark Lady Phoenix

Conroe, TX



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I'm a 37 year old house wife. I was hurt on the job in 2005 and now disabled. My writing is to me what keeps me going. I have a wonderful sweet husband that I love with everything in me. I hope you en.. more..

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