Although

A thoughtful affair

You are awake,
you contemplate,
how different
things might have been.

Your heart slowly tours,
mind softly explores
a new wind.

Sweet as the breeze
eager to please
you press yourself
against your queen.

She is your rock
the song as you talk
the shelter
you finally belong.

On feather pillows
in cloth better
widowed
is it so wrong
to dream;

Though she is,
your track,
you are my train.
And I be
your steam.

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

I don't think I'm gonna read into this one at all. lol It's got a dynamic flow and some really cool plays on words. But as I read it, my mind comes up with a new image for the overall piece every time.
But If I were to make an over all feeling that comes from it, I would have to say it like a day dream.

Aaron

[Seshat Nidaba]

This piece had very smooth curves, very easy to read :)