Inner Killing

Inner Killing

A Poem by Mjay55

Cruelty in the form of truth.
No wishes just a prayer for change.
Kill my optimism and leave my untampered soul.

© 2013 Mjay55


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I love short pieces like this. They seem so exposed and raw. Fantastic piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I really like poetry that is stripped down to its bare bones like this. It is hard to pack so much punch in to so few words, but you have done it. Very provocative. Nice piece. Thank you for sharing.


Posted 11 Years Ago


Mjay55

11 Years Ago

Thank you both for your kind words. It means so very much to me.

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