Graces

         Grace of one.

          A grace of two.

           When will you stop.

            Only when i am through with you.

Reviews

[Adam Adams]

The juxtaposition of two lovers have you well captured in few words... very "gracefully". Nice imagery here!

[emipoemi]

This is a fun read....feels absurd in a way, and made me smile. It has good flow and good rhymes. The last line however, kind of undermines the fun musicality (and also, the "threw" you're looking for is actually "through"). Without the "only" and with a contraction to "I am", you have the alignment of the two "when"'s ("when will you stop?/When I'm through with you."), and you also have perfect musicality. Well done! Short and sweet and fun!