ALO

ALO

A Poem by Finn
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This was edited by Duffy Dreamer'.

"
I am alone, too 
weird to be known

You all see my words, 
you never reply 
I am not that bad, am I?

Memory's of old lost
in my sea of untold

Separated from the 
pack, never to look back

I stagger, I cry, I track
Too lifeless to be
lost and broken back

I sit in the room, last to
be chosen, last to be looked

You know but never say 
for what I am today 

Now were here you 
all need help
upon I could seek
but I am blind as
you are weak
 

© 2017 Finn


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Being the stranger in the crowd can be an unenviable position to be subjected too¬! However, out of our darkest moments there can be a light of happiness - time will tell! Sad write, but an honest and brave poetical reflection of raw emotions - thanks for sharing - :-)

Posted 5 Years Ago


May I edit this for you? It is a good write but may cause people to not focus on the powerful meaning if caught up in the grammar errors.

Just let me know :)

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Posted 6 Years Ago


Finn

6 Years Ago

Of course.
A.L.

6 Years Ago

I am alone, too
weird to be known

You all see my words,
you never rep.. read more
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Sad and strangely gentle self portrait. Very moving.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 6 Years Ago



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