Guilty

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Follow me down with ongoing intent

Savor my resistance, for it's become decadent

I have found that my nature is despicable

And lately I've been meditating the unthinkable

 

I want life simple, I want life hard

I love to mingle, I love to be apart

Can I make it better or  I'm destined to eradicate

The only peace of mind I was ever able to create?

 

Or maybe its best if you stay away from me

And the best chance for your happiness is now to flee...

Didn't mean to bring you to your knees

Turns out i'm the  too cruel villain of this piece.

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

ahahahahaha! ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i love this piece young lady! she is the dominatrix and holds the power .. without apology ... don't get me wrong, I am not into domination of any sort .. but the chutzpah i read in this poem .. is beautiful!
E.
ps. the pic in closing is perfect, says i! there is power, mystery and above all else .. danger ;O powerful write .. says i! ..

[Ana B.]

ahaha, woah, this is one of my first writings, i like your take on it, thank you))))))))))

[Michael G. Smith]

Everyone wants the bad girl and then its too late when they realize they can't handle her.

[Ana B.]

Touche. Thanks :)

[Abilash Uttama]

wonderful description of feelings, rhyme and flow is superb. nice work!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[Jamestown]

Amazing piece again from you kind lady, flow is terrific as always and you delivered the
message crystal clear! I always enjoy reading your work, your wording is
very creative and unique, unclear thoughts of what one wants in their life definitely
happens, it seems to pop up more often then I'd like in my life, lol!
Thanks for sharing your amazing poetry and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

Thank you my dear friend for the amazing praise!

[Jamestown]

Welcome keep up the good work!

[R Smith]

a hard verdict on yourself Ana, its a remarkable poem of great rhyme's and flows so smoothly, the subject is sad but honest i'm guessing this is imagined work as i'm sure it could not be about you :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you Richard, i'm glad you liked it, and yes ,it's just a piece of fiction, in fact all of my workings are, for i myself have never been in love, but for now, words is all i have :)

[Nene]

Wow amazing.... to me it explained the jumbled thoughts of a villain... Someone who doesn't really mean to hurt other.s.... But nevertheless causes harm n then feels sorry for it..... He wants so stop but cant..... Its a beautiful poem... I loved it.... A great idea (y)

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Nene :)

[Prashant Rajput]

wonderful writing my friend...this is an exceptional one...:)

[Ana B.]

Thank you :)

[Emily]

Well worded!!
Well done!!

[Ana B.]

Thank you Emily :)

[Daisy]

wow
beautiful.............. wonderful poem ana well done

[Ana B.]

Thank you Daisy :)

[Saddam]

Its beautiful...........
Simply genius ....
Like it..................................................

[Ana B.]

Thank you as always my dear :D

[Saddam]

Welcome dear.........