Sins

Sins

A Poem by Ana B.
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ruffling through my old pages lately....

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If darkness had a name

What would you call it?

Someone who could take the blame

that is yours…but you’re afraid to admit

 

Wicked lilies at your door

Daring you to pick them up

Tsk,tsk…this darkness…easy to adore

Drinking your tears from morality’s cup…

 

Ascending…descending from this debasement

Because our obstinance is leading all the time

So who gets to decide the final assessment?

And who gets to write the infinite rhyme?

 

 

 

 


© 2017 Ana B.



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Very lovely to adore. thanks for sharing this wonderful talent.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Ana B.

2 Weeks Ago

Thank you very much Roxane :)
i love this piece, it honestly brought me into it the way that it was written. you provided a lot of imagery and i love it so much

Posted 5 Months Ago


Ana B.

5 Months Ago

Thank you very much Britt :)
I enjoyed this piece very much and " Someone who could take the blame that is yours…but you’re afraid to admit" is a valuable lesson in life. Nice work.


Posted 5 Months Ago


Ana B.

5 Months Ago

Thank you for stopping by, Darling :)
Darling

5 Months Ago

You most welcome.
Ach, what is this I find before me? A lily? Now who would leave such a thing. I shall place it in water and study it closely for clues.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Ana B.

8 Months Ago

haha, well everything has at least two sides to it...
R J Askew

8 Months Ago

I swear said lily has shifted in its vase overnight.
Very nicely done, I truly enjoyed this! Keep up the great writing

Posted 8 Months Ago


Ana B.

8 Months Ago

Thank you :)
You season the darkness with elegance and allure. She would be my lover I am certain of it! You've penned some killer lines, nuggets of truth... as always I'm rather taken with your words. R xo

Posted 8 Months Ago


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Ana B.

8 Months Ago

haha, thank you for the praise Ray :)
aLittlePain

8 Months Ago

You're welcome
If darkness had a name, I would call her, convenience, used at my need, invited at my time, and hid under when blameless. Yes, she is beautiful, I might just marry her some time

Posted 8 Months Ago


Ana B.

8 Months Ago

lol, clever :)
Very clever. You speak enough off of your words... with cunning-ness. There's a depth of something dark in your words though a light of shine as well which makes this write interesting reading. Wonderful poetry. Your rhythmic pattern that you always follow, sorry to say but it, is very gorgeous, of course, not more than you, Ana. Enjoyed reading it!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

I know what you mean...with time i became not so forgiving....and it's good that you did....no matte.. read more
Adams

2 Years Ago

Though, it still hurts when I find 'em on here...
... but yeah, you're right, "they shouldn'.. read more
Ana B.

2 Years Ago

Anytime, have a smashing day :)
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10 out of 10 in all sort.....And who gets to write the infinite rhyme?

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

thank you very much :)
And the answer is GOD He will have the final say upon our eternity and where we will spend it we need get right or left you have very good rhythm and flow with this write well done

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much for saying so
W R Stowe

2 Years Ago

you're quite welcome

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