WHAT AM I?: Nephilim WHAT AM I?: Nephilim
A teen boy gets killed, but trades his soul for another chance. He changes. A girl notices the new boy with silver eyes.
Nugatory dream

Nugatory dream

A Poem by Ana B.
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In love with the song from the author's note.

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I am alone in the fire storm.

Created to wander, lost in time…

But time’s an ocean which has no shore

A waltz with many victims, but lacking The Crime…

 

Golden wings has my angel…

Soaring deep, in the sanctuary of my soul

Unbreaking my hope…just touching it gently…

…this monopoly of love…making me whole…

 

Death of the black hole…just birth of a new star

The endless ocean this Nebula can provide…

But still, this ocean cannot keep apart

The spark of two pieces, once they collide.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


© 2017 Ana B.



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wonderful as always............. I love the way you explain the whole concept in one sentence
Great job

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

Thank you Daisy :)
Beautiful poetry Ana. So many wonderful lines...to many to pick my favorite, but what I like most is the softness of your tone which draws me in. Lovely writing my friend.

:) Julie

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

Thank you Julie, you're very sweet :)
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I like how you have brought oneness between sky and earth, through many symbols. I like the flashes of colors through lines too.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

I'm glad you like it :) Thank you!
'Golden wings has my angel…'
Love this line!
It inspires me!
Keep it up!!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

Thank you Emily!
Beautiful work Ana... there was some beautiful descriptions in this poem that made it really enjoyable. Always a pleasure reading what comes from your heart :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

Thanks a lot Aaron :)
no distance can keep two sparks from igniting in love...

i really like your line about the "waltz with many victims lacking a crime"
wish i had written that one.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

Thank you Jacob, you are very kind :)
beautiful poem Ana, 'But time’s an ocean which has no shore' is the line i have to say i wish i had written, truly you have the beauty of your soul in this one, thanks for sharing :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much for this Richard :)
I liked this one, many lines were just breath taking. Like this one,
Death of the black hole…just birth of a new star
the third line of first stanza was also well
visualised.
Nice write, well done.

Spidey. ...


Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the sweet words :)
Brilliant! I have enjoyed reading it a lot! Thanks for sharing this lovely piece of poetry, Ana B.! ☺

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

Thank you for enjoying Raja :)
I don't know what to say.

Speechless. x

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

:) I hope it's a good speechless

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