Nugatory dream

Nugatory dream

A Poem by Ana B.
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In love with the song from the author's note.

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I am alone in the fire storm.

Created to wander, lost in time…

But time’s an ocean which has no shore

A waltz with many victims, but lacking The Crime…

 

Golden wings has my angel…

Soaring deep, in the sanctuary of my soul

Unbreaking my hope…just touching it gently…

…this monopoly of love…making me whole…

 

Death of the black hole…just birth of a new star

The endless ocean this Nebula can provide…

But still, this ocean cannot keep apart

The spark of two pieces, once they collide.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


© 2017 Ana B.



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Ana B.

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Gorgeous piece, I agree the 1st stanza really propelled this poem. I enjoyed reading this
and always get excited to see your work surface, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

Thank you for always blessing my work with the presence!
Jamestown

2 Years Ago

Of course,
Ana, the first stanza is brilliantly magical; Soaring deep, in the sanctuary of my soul Unbreaking my hope…just touching it gentle…(gently?)…this monopoly of love…making me whole…: Beautiful! And the ending is so hopeful - that love will survive: But still, this ocean cannot keep apart The spark of two pieces, once they collide. Lovely metaphors for love; uplifting; wonderful writing as always! Thank you. Dale







Posted 2 Years Ago


Confuser

2 Years Ago

I try to tell the truth; there are wonderful writer here, like you. Y/W....Dale
Ana B.

2 Years Ago

It's an honor to be considered amongst them. Enjoy the rest of the Weekend. bye.
Confuser

2 Years Ago

You too sweet girl!! I will try my best. T/Y.....Dale
I listened to the Beatles - 'Real LOve' while I read this - purely coincidental but perfectly fitting. Your dream could be interpreted thus - Love will conquer all. The imagery is cosmic (sorry ;p )
thank you Ana, for sharing this.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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ANTO

2 Years Ago

ahh. Claire de lune, now ... . also fitting :))
Ana B.

2 Years Ago

mmm Debussy....one of my faves...
Awesome lines..Completely logical, but slightly vague at first,
"Created to wander, lost in time…
But time’s an ocean which has no shore
A waltz with many victims, but lacking The Crime…" --Best lines to me!


Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

Thank you very much for the review D :)
quite a title...for the thought within the last two lines...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ana B.

2 Years Ago

life's a contradiction.... a mind is not far behind...

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