Depth

This shady world, with lines so blurry

Will end when the last word will be said.

When the last passage of this journey

Will be inevitably read.

 

And then, who will remember

The melting moon resting on the lake…

The maple rain that falls in September…

The flaming sun, always wide awake…

 

The crimson rose of a kiss

Brought by the dew as a gift…

Our breaths’ everlasting eclipse

In cardamom dreams slightly dipped…

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[Sneh]

I like this short and sweet composition, placing perfect suitable scenarios.. :)

[Ana B.]

Thank you :)

[Falcon1]

Love that kind words and wonderful works added the music of yesteryear Makes for great poetry and music to my ears.

[conversations with her ..]

stunned... the image, the writing


well donee

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much Jada :)

[Nipplegrinder]

Gosh, this is beautiful. Such lavish use of vocabulary in the final line. This is a comfortable piece, in that real good way.

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much :)

[emmajoy]

Your words float.. tis as if you're watching an island floating off and away from you, shrouded in mist.. on and on.. on and on... and with it goes sound.. warmth. Finding your words sad..could be so easily drawn into the happening..

Guess you know how to make words take a hold of a reader.. how to write beautiful language with darkness nonetheless present. Extraordinary.

[Ana B.]

Thank you dear Emma. These words warm me from inside. Hugs :)

[emmajoy]

My pleasure but really must learn how to spell long words!

[Ana B.]

haha, i didn't notice anything ;)

[emmajoy]

Good - had added a letter of two and reversed two others in extraorinary .. lol... i give up!

[Ana B.]

hahahahahahaha, oh that, i'c crazier cause i read it extra urinary...

[emmajoy]

:)))))))))))))))))))))))))))

We must stop laughing, your poem is so very beautiful.. laughts spoil its mood. x

[Ana B.]

Perhaps you're right, but i would rather people laugh and put the ''fun'' in my funeral ya know...silly me

[emmajoy]

Not silly... or, if you are, so am i! Must disappear for a while.. take care of you. please.

[Ana B.]

you do the same dear.

[duff]

Such an appropriate title because this has mad depth. Your pen has skills and every poet has something that sets them apart. You have this delicacy in your writing that captivates. Always a joy to read your work.

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the stunning words dear duff :)

[duff]

You are very welcome Ana.

[Ghania]

Very well-written!!
"This shady world, with lines so blurry
Will end when the last word will be said.
When the last passage of this journey
Will be inevitably read."

Loved reading it.

[Ana B.]

Thank you :)

[Ghania]

You're Welcome.

[pia]

beautifully written !! great expressions describing the hidden secrets of the world and whats to come out of it !!

[Ana B.]

Thank you for the sweet words Pia :)

[Jamestown]

Well penned!
As always your view on this piece is fantastic and my opinion
right on the money:)
Always enjoy reading your work!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Ana B.]

Thank you very much James.

[Basit Majeed]

really an awesome piece of self realization of the truth about the world and life

[Ana B.]

Thank you Basit :)