10 seconds till sunrise

10 seconds till sunrise

A Poem by Ana B.

Subtle working has this silicon veil…

Clouding Archeus’  bashful effulgence,

All of us living in our homemade jail

Feeding off the commiserations indulgence…

 

Throwing digital daggers at each other

With spectacular opulence.

Tears of sulfur we gather

With words as our eternal monuments.

 

And in this culture of fear

How talented is death -

The true sincerity’s emir

To whom we’re not  afraid to confess…






© 2017 Ana B.



Author's Note

Ana B.
Archeus - is also called the Anima Mundi, Soul of the World, Spirit of the World, The Transitive LVX, The Path of Saturn (connecting Malkuth and Yesod in the system of Jewish mysticism called the Kabbalah), the Earth Sphere and the Zone Girdling the Earth. It is also sometimes simply called the lower astral sphere, or the "geographic" region of it, as everything in the Archeus parallels physical manifestation.


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A very solemn and profound piece of poetry, you got here. It really speaks about an important matter. My only qualm is that I'm not sure the title is right for it, for such a title gives the impression that it's about something deeper, more philosophical that what it's implying (even the artwork at the bottom adds to that effect). It's a good poem as is, I just don't find the sense in the title, and that the title could itself headline a whole other poem you could write.

Posted 1 Month Ago


Ana B.

1 Month Ago

Thank you for your thoughts Emipoemi. Perhaps you're right. I chose this title because these are the.. read more
emipoemi

1 Month Ago

my pleasure.
In cyberworld, genuine fellowship and even the sincerity of the common handshake have no relevance, a quasi, artificial existence bereft of human endeavour and kindred spirit!

A finely penned philosophical, poetic analogy, with a concluding and compromising, common dominator were none shall escape!

Posted 2 Months Ago


Tom

2 Months Ago

Time will tell ?
Ana B.

2 Months Ago

of course...it is something i have no power over. Or anybody else for that matter.
Tom

2 Months Ago

The one great leveller, but nothing to fear or feel verbose over if the heart is pure and soul is ri.. read more
"Throwing digital daggers..." such a brilliant line. "Up all night and party all day" oops, that's was a motto in a younger life, lol. Anot her wonderful write Ana.

Posted 8 Months Ago


Ana B.

8 Months Ago

haha, thanks Michael :)
This poem is pure artwork. Like the song too :)

Posted 8 Months Ago


Ana B.

8 Months Ago

Thanks Gullia :)
I liked the words and thoughts. Artwork is beautiful also. The statements in the poem made the reader think and ponder. Life, actions and ending. Please we must learn and understand.
"And in this culture of fear
How talented is death -
The true sincerity’s emir
To whom we’re not afraid to confess"
The above lines. Solid and true. Thank you Ana for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Months Ago


Ana B.

8 Months Ago

Thank you very much John :)
Coyote Poetry

8 Months Ago

You are welcome dear Ana.
This poem touched my heart. Thank you for creating this piece of art. Keep going :)

Posted 9 Months Ago


Ana B.

9 Months Ago

Thank you for reading it, Lyla :)
LylaCrysal

9 Months Ago

Your welcome :)
Agreed. 'Bots already got us licked. Our big deaths will be the last, great, human experience.

Posted 9 Months Ago


Ana B.

9 Months Ago

scary and thrilling eh? Thank you :)
Who truly views the full consequence of a walked-upon path - at the beginnings of their lifetime? And when you TRULY do "understand" the depths of a choice is there any choice left at all?

Posted 9 Months Ago


Chris

9 Months Ago

" I want..." means so little until
it means everything
and then - the price is behind .. read more
Ana B.

9 Months Ago

unless ''I want'' transforms in ''I'll get it'' ...
Chris

9 Months Ago

That TOO is a " price" ...
Talk about timing
i was just thinking about that in the morning
how fear changes the make up of places
how people interact
how happy they are and could be

The sun rises all the same on everyone
Really you touched so much

Thanks for sharing

Posted 9 Months Ago


Ana B.

9 Months Ago

Thank you very much, SS :)
I guess you're trying to imply how our generation of millennials coincide with everyday work life. That sometimes our refuge is words that will linger a test of time, no matter how vague and self-afflicting life is.

Great read to use the word Archeus as it brings a sense of curiosity on how it is used and what it represents which is I think something as powerful as Time and High Being as well.

Great read =)

Posted 9 Months Ago


Ana B.

9 Months Ago

huh, interesting insight :) i love it. But yes, you're right, the truths are in plain sight, but peo.. read more

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