Simple words

Simple words

A Poem by Ana B.
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in love with the music from author's note

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Can’t stop seeing

How the universe exhales

Soft beauty freeing

From incongruous parades

The lonely atoms,

That are hunting for delight,

Those graceful phantoms

That shimmer in the night…

And when it will inhale

Will all the roads come back to me?

And everything that seemed so frail

Will finally make me see

Where lays the strength.

And when I think that I know

What comes after another breath;

Time is showing me what was fast is now slow

Waiting for the next exhale…

 

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Ana B.

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Every poem of yours I have read until now makes me think that they are a celebration of poetry. You are among the best poets I have met. :)

~Lyla

Posted 4 Months Ago


Ana B.

4 Months Ago

That's amazing! Thank you for the kind words dear Lyla!
LylaCrystal

4 Months Ago

Your welcome dear Ana!
''And when I think that I know

What comes after another breath;

Time is showing me what was fast is now slow...''

we actually think we know what tomorrow brings , but we don't we have just an expectation of it on our mind. But I am glad '' I know nothing about, life surprise me always''.

I really love this one. simply beautiful.

Posted 6 Months Ago


Ana B.

6 Months Ago

Thank you very much :)
Stunning... Easily breathed... Simple meter, combined with passionate word choice left my chest going up and down, line by line... Very nicely penned...

Posted 6 Months Ago


Ana B.

6 Months Ago

Thank you very much Silente :)
Silente

6 Months Ago

Most welcome... Love this violin you posted, as well... I am sucker for that stuff... Keep writing t.. read more
Ana B.

6 Months Ago

haha thank you again :)
I love the misty and magical theme. It's as if time slowed and life became more visible. :)

Posted 6 Months Ago


Ana B.

6 Months Ago

Thank you very much :)
Amazing job as always, Ana! I love your poems

Posted 7 Months Ago


Ana B.

7 Months Ago

Thank you Gullia :)
I see why you love that music, it envelops you in thought and mesmerises with images and senses flashing into life and letting your mind float into the music, becoming one and hearing the rhythm of life that is always there, yet seldom heard.
Beautiful words.

Posted 7 Months Ago


Ana B.

7 Months Ago

Thank you :) Music was always my inspiration
Dear Ana. Powerful and logical journey in your words. You create places and realistic thoughts in your words. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


Ana B.

7 Months Ago

Thank you dear John :)
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

You are welcome Ana.
Exquisite imagery and flow. Brilliant description of the living universe breathing as we wait with baited breath for the result. Sometimes waiting is the wisest action to take. Wait and see what the universe reveals... lovely!

Posted 7 Months Ago


Ana B.

7 Months Ago

Indeed, but only sometimes :) Thank you Annette
Wow very beautiful and elegant. This poem speaks volumes, sometimes we need to slow down and enjoy the little things good job :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


Ana B.

7 Months Ago

Yes, i should heed that advice as well :) Thank you Kesha
Kesha

7 Months Ago

You are welcome :)
Aloha Ana, something so soothing and lovely about reading you. I loved the last three lines, they are so thoughtful and I feel quite deeply rooted there in my life at the moment :) Mahalo for your beautiful words. Izzy

Posted 7 Months Ago


Ana B.

7 Months Ago

Thank you for the beautiful words Izzy :)
Island Hippy

7 Months Ago

You're welcome

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