Brushes

Brushes

A Poem by Ana B.

The skin of the night…dark shades it has

A short remedy for my social allergy;

A moon shaped dream that smells of jazz

While thoughts perform the dance of anarchy.

 

And there is war around every corner

Between egos and vanities…

Sincerity could be the armor

Yet I still hide in my castle of fantasies…

 

I gaze into your silent amber and I know

Your time is not the same as mine.

Yet how stunning those ghostly seconds aglow

While hearts play their pantomime

 

Yet still,

Gifting resplendent paintings

To this watercolor universe

 

 

 

 

 



 



© 2017 Ana B.



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Ana B.

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Aloha Ana, you're the finest of poets! Smooth and rich read each line so generous! Izzy

Posted 4 Hours Ago


Ana B.

2 Hours Ago

Thank you so much Izzy!
social aversion to all the egos, yes, me too..

but there are some who paint the universe with watercolors that are soft, subdued, humble.

j.

Posted 1 Day Ago


Ana B.

1 Day Ago

indeed there are. Thank you for stopping by Jacob :)
Poem full of emotions, great job!

Posted 2 Days Ago


Ana B.

2 Days Ago

Thank you ))
Great and task full.
Your poem worth your emotions at the time of composition as evidenced in your conversation

Posted 2 Days Ago


Ana B.

2 Days Ago

Thank you :)
S. Rubein Geterminah

2 Days Ago

Welcome Ana B
Wow this was very elegant, I loved the feel of this and the emotions it provokes! Very well done :)

Posted 2 Days Ago


Ana B.

2 Days Ago

Thank you Kesha :)
Kesha

2 Days Ago

You're welcome :)
watercolor universe..good.

Posted 3 Days Ago


Ana B.

3 Days Ago

Thank you :)
Very pleasant to read, a fine arrangement.

Someone once said to me "ego is not your amigo", called it the start of all wars, literally and figuratively.

I like how you ended it, speaking of amber and time. All of this electronic s**t we post and leave behind is like a modern version of a mosquito fossilized in amber. Probably not as timeless though... The Cheavuax cave paintings are only 30ish thousand years old. Fossilized amber is millions of years old. I'm not certain our collective hard drives will last that long.

(I enjoyed the music as well)

Posted 3 Days Ago


Impenetrable Ruins

3 Days Ago

That's true. From my point of view, almost everybody has terrible sense of humor. No one gets my j.. read more
Ana B.

3 Days Ago

Well, if i wouldn't regard my life with humor I'd be totally screwed..and i can relate ..no one gets.. read more
Impenetrable Ruins

3 Days Ago

Poetry that's obvious is usually boring anyway.
Your words are amazing and imagination is beautiful. Awesomeness is fully filled in your work. Keep writing.😊

Posted 3 Days Ago


Ana B.

3 Days Ago

Thank you very much Raj Sahu :)
You've truly captured a moment in time that allows the reader to visualize your words.

Posted 3 Days Ago


Ana B.

3 Days Ago

Thank you :)
Nour_han

3 Days Ago

My pleasure 😊
This touched the deepest part of my heart , well done ana 😊

Posted 3 Days Ago


Ana B.

3 Days Ago

Thank you very much :)

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