B.S. (Be Sure)

B.S. (Be Sure)

A Poem by modtoddinc
"

Fed up, put out, done, finale.

"



In the mist of morning adherence,

I am beyond all clearance.

Forget the path that was...

the fork,

the knife,

the spoon...

My love has died.


Your mother lied.

I am my only truth,

the realism inside my youth,

F**k you then was a joke,

it's become my only hope.


All the cards have played, playa,

now what for you se'as

In so deep, in truth the sleep,

as gratitude and thanks are steep,

and this quagmire's too quick & deep.


Conquistador sixteen,

drop two, I am you,

never fail to turn,

into what you desire,

or suffer the consequences;

a fool.


Zero begins...

Zero Ends...

Astrophysics turns into

Quantum engines.


I want to know, Don't you?

forget me not a pettle tossed

forgotten not, holocaust, and most definitely lost...

to those who knew,

Batman and Robin will come through.


Give to me the cupcake of your most precious memories and I will step on it and make it dirt;

ground like coffee that you drink each day to stay awake.


Why must we play falsehoods way?

In, out. Around, about.

Real, lost... who cares and more importantly,

who determines the cost?

Of ____ LIFE??


My life is... _____


You fill in the blank with importance and honesty,

and then come to me with nothing.


© 2015 modtoddinc



Author's Note

modtoddinc
off the cuff, as always... leave me something, don't, I really don't give a flying fuck.

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dan
Todd, Wow what has you so bitter? I haven't done reviews in a long while due to my wife's health battles then I come to find this? Your writing, as usual, is tremendous but I don't believe I've ever read this tone in your previous writes. I certainly hope all is well with you and this was just some blowing off of necessary steam. If I can help you at all message me, OK? take care...dan

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At the time of this write I was extremely upset and angry because after several years of trying to d.. read more



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Very nice use of words. I had to read twice. Left the reader with a lot to think about. I did enjoy the thoughts.
Coyote

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Wow. That poem is really thought provoking (in a good way). I like it.

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dan
Todd, Wow what has you so bitter? I haven't done reviews in a long while due to my wife's health battles then I come to find this? Your writing, as usual, is tremendous but I don't believe I've ever read this tone in your previous writes. I certainly hope all is well with you and this was just some blowing off of necessary steam. If I can help you at all message me, OK? take care...dan

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

modtoddinc

2 Years Ago

At the time of this write I was extremely upset and angry because after several years of trying to d.. read more
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it is certainly thought provoking,life in motion

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This is an amazing piece... the flow in your thoughts, the creativity yet the honest and straight forward no nonsense write! I loved it buddy one of my favorites I have read on here :)

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modtoddinc

2 Years Ago

much gratitude to the dude.

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modtoddinc

Tacoma, WA



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I write what I feel with honesty, and integrity. I love art in all it's forms, especially poetry and multi-media. I love to read, watch movies, play music, and study comparative mythology. I hope to o.. more..

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