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Line Cook

Line Cook

A Poem by modtoddinc
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Starting Over

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That old forgotten line cook,

stinky, dirty b*****d; dog.

his beer smells stale as he's a prince who's never been a frog.


That forgotten Rock-n-Roller,

funky, dirty b*****d; god.

S**t sells like nothing faster, and he's a demi-hog.


Then, the 'ol diss: 'I understand your passion.'

creative under standin' in a most persuasive sway,

not then... not now... but with-in... you... yet to be...

Full. and Filled.


Ware, the Jeanie-in-the-bottle,

tasted. full. and ripe,

these are the consequences

being the sharpest of all blades,


Life.

© 2016 modtoddinc


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A different and interesting style of writing...

Posted 7 Years Ago


Great poem. The first time read it, i didn't understand it. But now that I have read it a second time, I completly understand it.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I have known a few line cooks. Good and fun people to have known. I like the use of the language and the good description shared. Thank you my friend for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


very interesting write ! i enjoyed the read ..

Posted 7 Years Ago


I liked the rhyming and also the very ending... Which you ended with a very strong word.

Posted 7 Years Ago



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modtoddinc
modtoddinc

Tacoma, WA



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I write what I feel with honesty, and integrity. I love art in all it's forms, especially poetry and multi-media. I love to read, watch movies, play music, and study comparative mythology. I hope to o.. more..

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