Tenth grade English teacher, It took me seven years But now I understand Why you did not laugh When I answered your question: "What do you wanna be when you grow up?"
Nice work if you can get it. What's interesting here are the first three six syllable lines, very orderly and direct, and then the second three are three distinct meters, where you give us your punch, and the flow offsets perfectly the final question. The title as answer is wonderful.
lol, this was hilarious XD
A very good way of dealing with the problem of pepole beginning to expect you to get serious about the issue of planning which profession you want to spent all your working life exercising.
Overall awesome!
Nice work if you can get it. What's interesting here are the first three six syllable lines, very orderly and direct, and then the second three are three distinct meters, where you give us your punch, and the flow offsets perfectly the final question. The title as answer is wonderful.