I Wanna Be A Porn Star!

Just for fun.

Tenth grade English teacher,
It took me seven years
But now I understand
Why you did not laugh
When I answered your question:
"What do you wanna be when you grow up?"

Reviews

[just rose.]

Nice work if you can get it. What's interesting here are the first three six syllable lines, very orderly and direct, and then the second three are three distinct meters, where you give us your punch, and the flow offsets perfectly the final question. The title as answer is wonderful.

[Joiedevivre]

did you really? :O

[Saraplenty]

Ha! This is priceless.

[Gheeneil]

Most of the time, it would take time to realize one thing. This was fun.

[Abbie]

do you really want to be a porn star ? lol god write

[freelancejouster]

this is cute and clever. great work. i would clap, but i'm without hands at the moment.

[Cocoacandy]

nice. i love it.. great work... made me smile lol
*cocoabean*

[SimplyDelicious]

lol, I found it funny!

[Emilee Grimm]

HA HA This was great! So simple yet creative in the way that you gave the answer to your teacher's question as the title! Very amusung and well-written! (Isn't it great when people ask you a question and you give tham an answer and it is NOT what they wanted to hear?)

[MiidniightSoul]

This is a really nice and funny piece. Made me laugh. Simple and a straight answer to a question like this. Too bad I haden't thought of it before lol.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Laugh for sure! Thanks.
Light,
Siddartha