I Wanna Be A Porn Star!

Just for fun.

Tenth grade English teacher,
It took me seven years
But now I understand
Why you did not laugh
When I answered your question:
"What do you wanna be when you grow up?"

Reviews

[just rose.]

Nice work if you can get it. What's interesting here are the first three six syllable lines, very orderly and direct, and then the second three are three distinct meters, where you give us your punch, and the flow offsets perfectly the final question. The title as answer is wonderful.

[girlForgetful]

Hahaha!

[MiaIntheSkywithDiamonds]

amusing very nice!

[trainwreck]

I enjoyed reading this quite a bit. Your style is very interesting.

[ice]

lol.....Did your answer come to fruition?
enjoyed
ice

[Princess3Morag]

Hahahaha, very funny! :P

[OT]

haha bet the teacher wasn't expecting that!! nice and jaunty

[Ashley June Canfield]

Oh my :P

[Jennifer Lenhardt]

Hah! Awesome! the insight and wisdom of teachers:)

[Haz]

:) sometimes I forget all of the comic poems, too much of the I cry blood shite. Jabberwocky any day. They're clean and 'smart' and relatable, esp suits them to be short and easy to remember. Could serve to be more popular than you first thought, kudos :D

[Perception Shapes Poetr..]

yeah its funny when you're young and your flesh is nicely packed for the meat market - but its sad when porn stars lose all their marketable assets and have no mental or emotional richness to fall back on....