I Wanna Be A Porn Star!

Just for fun.

Tenth grade English teacher,
It took me seven years
But now I understand
Why you did not laugh
When I answered your question:
"What do you wanna be when you grow up?"

Reviews

[just rose.]

Nice work if you can get it. What's interesting here are the first three six syllable lines, very orderly and direct, and then the second three are three distinct meters, where you give us your punch, and the flow offsets perfectly the final question. The title as answer is wonderful.

[Chelsea]

This is so funny! I was debating when I saw the title if I wanted to read---- But I'm glad I did!
I can just imagine some kid saying that to a stuck up teacher!! Very, very funny!!

[Kristen E. Haynes]

ha. I love this. I can really apprecaite a work that cannot stand without the title. There's something about an involved title that sparks my interest. This is very funny. =)
KH

[Nothing Personal]

Quick and hilarious. Really enjoyed the title after I finished reading your poem. Even if its as simple as it sounds, it has that smartness and that touch..

[Angel's Lady]

Fabulous! haha I love it!

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Well, you're alright Mike but I don't know if I want to see that much of you. hahahaha...you should have chosen male prostitute instead...You could find yourself a sugar mama that way and she could leave you her millions. (laughing hysterically)

[FireWoman]

Sweet! Teachers hear it all, from the mouths of babes, you know =)

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

XD very amusing

[Ashley]

LOL!!! thats a funny one 100/100

[Stacey]

LMAO!!! Great response Mike,,,,hahaha! Thanks for the chuckle:)