Trapped within

its how i feel sometimes. never being able to be set free.

I'm trapped within my self
Not a soul can hear me screaming
Thoughts restricted to my head
Now my mind is blindly leading

Every breath that I inhale
Chokes me with toxic gas
In the chamber that holds me
Trapped in crystal glass

My body's always cold
But I never feel the chill
And it matches my intentions
In this fight that’s aimed to kill

My mind is to the point
Its bound to snap right now
How mad do you think I’ll get?
You think I know some how?

If I could tell the future
Do you think I’d be like this?
I'm dying inside slowly
And falling into the abyss

Soon I’ll be the one
They're lowering into the ground
The coffin nailed tightly shut
So you wont here a sound

Author's Note

please tell me if you like it better with or without stanzas. i'm not really sure at this point.

Reviews

[Alicia™]

A very good piece of writing, but I think it'd be much better if you broke it into stanzas.