the things i've learned:

the things i've learned:

A Poem by the penumbra

I.  the Captain of your ship isn't you
but rather the dreams you hold
and the Paradise you thought you forgot.

II. maquillage can't change me;
it won't makeup for what I'm lacking.

III. hope's counterpart is not God.

IV. nothing good ever comes free
but you can surely get what you need,
enough to get by,
and you can dream of a better life
that won't just fall form the sky.

V. when it comes to the end justifying the
means, most don't really care at all.

© 2014 the penumbra


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is there a counterpart to hope? I want you to tell me what it is, but I fear you want your audience to figure it out for themselves. ... is it the means, the process that matters before the end is insight, surely there will be a finality to whatever projects are in the works, and the process is either all or nothing, there has to be at least one person waiting for the effects and not allowing the project or processes to go on without producing a final result, but it is a collaborative process? I hold the dreams and the Paradise as my Captain,

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is there a counterpart to hope? I want you to tell me what it is, but I fear you want your audience to figure it out for themselves. ... is it the means, the process that matters before the end is insight, surely there will be a finality to whatever projects are in the works, and the process is either all or nothing, there has to be at least one person waiting for the effects and not allowing the project or processes to go on without producing a final result, but it is a collaborative process? I hold the dreams and the Paradise as my Captain,

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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