whole

whole

A Poem by the penumbra

How can you deny
the silver-dusted night sky
and the stars that have fallen
leave sparkles caught in your eye

You are the book
that leaves me longing,
empty, aching to turn another page
but fills me

so completely that
I swear I've finally became whole
that all my broken pieces
may stick together again, creases 
are left, scars 

yes,
but I am intact; one entity  
and coming undone all at the same time.

© 2014 the penumbra


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I can feel all the raw emotion in this. Simply beautiful and well written. I enjoy this piece a lot.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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Added on December 16, 2014
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the penumbra
the penumbra

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