Be The Rain

Be The Rain

A Poem by MomzillaNC
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A philosophy of life

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Be the Rain


I am the rain.


The mountain may spit fire at the sky…

Still the rain will fall.


The mountain may quake at the world…

Still the rain will fall.


The mountain will be silent and brooding…

Still the rain will fall.


The mountain will tumble down upon the earth…

Still the rain will fall.


The mountain will be reduced to sandy shore…

Still the rain will fall.


Be the rain.

© 2014 MomzillaNC


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love this..simple...straight forward ..deeply meditative ... isn't it funny how most of us run to get out of the rain ...i think the faster we run the more rain drops we run into .. so have developed the sllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww rain walk ... now i shall add the spiritual "...be the rain" ;)) nice one Mom!
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

i read it several times ..thanks for sharing :)
MomzillaNC

6 Years Ago

I’m honored. Merry Christmas.
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

same to you Mom! ;)



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I love the rain and do want tobe it. wonderul poem.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

2 Years Ago

Thanks so much.
I love ain. a nd I love this poem, The brillnce is in it's simplicity.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

3 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
Simple and nice with a good message. Enjoyed reading your poem :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

love this..simple...straight forward ..deeply meditative ... isn't it funny how most of us run to get out of the rain ...i think the faster we run the more rain drops we run into .. so have developed the sllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww rain walk ... now i shall add the spiritual "...be the rain" ;)) nice one Mom!
E.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

i read it several times ..thanks for sharing :)
MomzillaNC

6 Years Ago

I’m honored. Merry Christmas.
Einstein Noodle

6 Years Ago

same to you Mom! ;)
Thank you for a great piece lovely!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
Great message, being able to adapt and never give up attitude, I agrre and
enjoyed this piece, thanks for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
I got the message loud and clear.
Well Done.

armin. ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much.
There is no limit to the damage done by giving up hope, but if like the rain you seek the path of least resistance and find your way through it all, you will come out on top through sheer persistence.

I very well stated piece indeed Momzilla.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Absolutely. I'm pleased you get it. Thanks.
realmwriter

9 Years Ago

You are most welcome.
I really enjoyed the visuals that came with this. The rain ever persistent flowing down upon the mountain wiping away it's rage till it is naught but grains of sand.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you. It's an attitude to conflict that I try to cultivate -- admittedly with only spotty succe.. read more
Jennifer Queen

9 Years Ago

I think that comes through very well in your work here. It is a good thing to strive towards. I look.. read more
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thanks. And, I yours.
That was profound and very deep persistence wins out

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thanks, Tate.

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