Whisper me a kiss…

Whisper me a kiss…

A Poem by MomzillaNC


"The Kiss" by Klimt


Whisper me a kiss…


Softly… softly brushing my cheek

As an - Oh! - so delicate caress…

A gentle kiss upon my fingertips,

So healing in its tenderness…

Breathing your kiss upon my mouth,

You softly whisper me a kiss…


Oh! Whisper me a kiss…


In your sweet breath is the promise

Wafting me gently to a healing space

This oft tossed ship carried ‘pon your breath

Oh! Let me harbor in your embrace!

Oh love… again… whisper me a kiss…

Set us free to sail ‘cross time and space.


Oh! Again… Whisper me a kiss…


In your arms, the promise of forever…

Shining as stars in your ebony eyes

Come my love, tomorrow’s our dawn…

Floating free as the star flies 

Our love, the vessel… you, my tether…

On whispered kisses, together we’ll rise.


Softly… Softly… Whisper me a kiss…



by D. Denise Dianaty

© 2015 MomzillaNC


Author's Note

MomzillaNC
I finished this one, 08/30/2014.

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I love romantic poetry and this is breathtaking..
"whisper me a kiss" ... so soft, so sweet, so filled with passion without going over that fine line from sensual to erotic....and the painting you chose is the perfect compliment to your gorgeous poem.
Stunning!
:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much. From you, this is high praise indeed.



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beautiful piece, i love it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

8 Years Ago

Thank you.
You won the 'gentle feelings' contest!? That's awesome! This is such a beautiful and unique piece, no wonder you did! :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
Passionate, adorable, beautiful and a sensual piece of poetry. Thank-you.

armin. ...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
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Ahhhh.. I must say a lover of Klimt myself, I can feel the passion reeling inside with that kiss. Loved it!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you. The drawing at the bottom of the piece is one of my own. But, I just had to include that .. read more
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9 Years Ago

Oh... beautiful art! I love it!
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

ty :)
Now that is what a kiss should be. A poem fashioned after my dreams. Beautiful Momz.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you. This is drawn from my own true experience with my husband. A dance may tell a woman if sh.. read more
willweb

10 Months Ago

You are featuring it and here I am, back again after 8 years. Wow, it definitely proves that poetry .. read more
MomzillaNC

10 Months Ago

Thanks so much. Yeah, I'm featuring my stuff from here as I post it anew on Medium, where I earn a m.. read more
Oh so feminine in this one the feelings the quiet loving touch of it The only thing I would change is the color of the font too light to see easilly

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Is it dark enough? I only added 5% more black.
Tate Morgan

9 Years Ago

yes it works
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thanks. You've been a big help!
This is beautiful, I felt the words dancing across the page. Thx for sharing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
I love romantic poetry and this is breathtaking..
"whisper me a kiss" ... so soft, so sweet, so filled with passion without going over that fine line from sensual to erotic....and the painting you chose is the perfect compliment to your gorgeous poem.
Stunning!
:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much. From you, this is high praise indeed.
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a whisper like no other....only lovers can truly share. wonderfully written.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you.
A kiss such as you describe is the magic that heals all and soothes every care and bother away.

Not everyone is so lucky, but they should be, even if just the once.

Loved this. Beccy.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you. This is actually a way my husband has when he kisses me sometimes.

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