Who wins?

My first attempt at Haiku

If zombies attacked
groups of suicide bombers
Who would win? Why… YOU!

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Would need considerable thought behind the coffin door.. directed by, dressed by, music composed by the Night Moaners! if anyone could project all that ASAP to you brilliatn red liners.. the world could be saved.. or something! Love the crazy cleverness of this.

[MomzillaNC]

Thanks so much! It’s the only haiku I’ve ever composed.

[emmajoy]

It's clever fo sure although i find that font far too large for comfot! Guess it goes along with the meaning behind the haiku.

[Troy Henson]

There is always room for a good Zombie movie however the same can not be said for the other.

Sharp and to the point.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[Samuel Dickens]

Hah-ha! Yeah, we sure would, wouldn't we? You know, I think that might make a good movie.

[MomzillaNC]

Thanks. That’s one zombie flick I might watch…

[1VJ]

I'm not sure if there's a winner, aside from your haiku! :) Zombies...not a fan except for the vintage music.

[MomzillaNC]

Zombies and suicide bombers are both heinous threats to you. If they take each other out, you are the clear beneficiary! :D

Actually, I’m not a zombie fan either. This was my first attempt at haiku for a contest of zombie haiku.

[Einstein Noodle]

hmmmm strong underlying angst as i read it ..i think the irony of your "Who Wins" is sharp, social,spiritual and political expression well done ..i can feel it pressing in on my thought and heart .....much i don't understand in the Why_YOU! .. not sure who the players are ... the directness and intensity of haiku is there .. but nature is absent .. i think this is something in its own category .. very emotive ..very up to the moment for all ..sad to say :(
E.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[Lyn Anderson]

I think we are all tired. And angry. It's ok to feel vengeful. It's human. They aren't human in the way we understand.

[MomzillaNC]

I think that’s the whole thing about zombies… they allow us to project all the inhumanity of humankind onto one blameless creature, driven by forces we nor they understand.

[Lyn Anderson]

I agree. Smart lady.

[MomzillaNC]

:D :D

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The walking dead will save the living... now that is something I got to see.

[MomzillaNC]

Me too! When are they gonna make THAT movie?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Don't know, maybe you should write it :)

[MomzillaNC]

Yeah… not really my cup of tea. I don’t really care for the whole zombie part of the horror genre. This was actually written for a haiku contest by Carrie Golden.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Go Zombies!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

"it's the time of the season" for this to happen.

[MomzillaNC]

Yeah! THAT is a zombie movie I’d want to see! :D