The Dance

The Dance

A Poem by MomzillaNC

Birds in the trees
flowers and honey bees
Cloud painted skies
feelin’ sun-dappled highs
After sundown
earth wears a moonlight gown
Life takes a chance
continuing the dance

Original illustration created 12 June 2019, by D. Denise Dianaty

© 2019 MomzillaNC


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I am impressed with how you changed the artwork to add your poem to it. I love how your version of the artwork takes into account that your poem starts out in sunshine & ends in moonlight. Very well done. Strong rhyming & imagery -- show instead of tell. I think "moonlight" would sound better as "moonlit" that's the only bump for me (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


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MomzillaNC

4 Years Ago

Thank you. And, as I explained to Lyn Anderson below, I specifically chose "moonlight" because the i.. read more
barleygirl

4 Years Ago

Makes perfect sense!



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I am impressed with how you changed the artwork to add your poem to it. I love how your version of the artwork takes into account that your poem starts out in sunshine & ends in moonlight. Very well done. Strong rhyming & imagery -- show instead of tell. I think "moonlight" would sound better as "moonlit" that's the only bump for me (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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MomzillaNC

4 Years Ago

Thank you. And, as I explained to Lyn Anderson below, I specifically chose "moonlight" because the i.. read more
barleygirl

4 Years Ago

Makes perfect sense!
Sort of looking out to gale force winds and rain.
But your words are doing it for me now.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

5 Years Ago

I’m glad I could lift your perspective. Thanks.
It is a little love poem to life! This is a sweet poem, very uplifting!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

5 Years Ago

Thank you!
It's got a nice flow and rhythm to it. Elegant and simple. I might try moonlit as opposed to moonlight, but either way it's a nice verse

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

5 Years Ago

Thank you.

I chose “moonlight” because I intended it to read that the earth wear.. read more
Lyn Anderson

5 Years Ago

T'is often thus.
Life is a dance that goes on 24/7.
A truly sweet little poem.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

5 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Dale!

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