An attractive Storm

An attractive Storm

A Poem by Moniba
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All words and colours twisted Into an attractive storm…

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When colours collect dust
And words are concealed
When beauty is shaded
And the clouds are heavy grey

When a path leading to gardens
Becomes one going to graves
And when flowers turned to gold
Are crushed underneath feet

When diamonds cut to perfection
Join the coal once more
And the gold and the jewels
Are met by graves on hills

The world becomes sinister
People deprived of passion
All words and colours twisted
Into an attractive storm…

~Moniba.


© 2013 Moniba



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Moniba
Constructive criticism please.

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i honestly felt every word you wrote. It created great imagery for me thank you for sharing.

Posted 3 Years Ago


Moniba

3 Years Ago

Thankyou!! It's a great feeling to know that people actually felt the words.

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Moniba
Moniba

Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



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I'm an eighteen year old, Muslim and Pakistani. I like simple yet poetic pieces of writing(prose and poetry), and I have a thing for dictionaries. more..

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