A Poem by Amber Smith

I have so many unspoken words.
Because I am not allowed
To speak how I feel
Oh, But if you knew
If i had just pressed "Send"

I write to get the trapped feelings out
And I think each time
If you only knew,
If you just knew
The terrible heartache I feel each and every moment
You would understand,
If I had only pressed "Send"

But I know you feel the impact
Just as I do
You've told me in a quivering voice,
Afraid of what you were saying.
Has that fear subsided?
If I only knew.
If I would just press "Send".
I could transform from dust
To once again alive

© 2017 Amber Smith

Author's Note

Amber Smith
This is not to be graded. I write in a cathartic manner. Your criticisms are welcome but I am happy with how each and every one of my pieces turns out. Because they are me. Simply me.

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Ah yes.. So many times have we chosen to not Press Send... I get you in this write. Magnificent Hun.. Happy writing!

Posted 4 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amber Smith

3 Months Ago

Thank you:)
"Juat as I do" is a typo I found in the piece :)

Keep working on your art! I look forward to reading more of your stuff in the future.

Posted 4 Months Ago

Amber Smith

4 Months Ago

Appreciated. But please read the authors note.
J. B.

4 Months Ago

oh. I wasn't grading it like... critically. just based on what I thought of it.

also.. read more

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Added on September 20, 2017
Last Updated on September 20, 2017


Amber Smith
Amber Smith

St. Petersburg, FL

I just enjoy writing. Don't care to much about the criticism. Writing should be about storytelling and the feeling it gives you as you write and create. more..

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