Send.

Send.

A Poem by Amber Smith

I have so many unspoken words.
Because I am not allowed
To speak how I feel
Oh, But if you knew
If i had just pressed "Send"

I write to get the trapped feelings out
And I think each time
If you only knew,
If you just knew
The terrible heartache I feel each and every moment
You would understand,
If I had only pressed "Send"

But I know you feel the impact
Just as I do
You've told me in a quivering voice,
Afraid of what you were saying.
Has that fear subsided?
If I only knew.
If I would just press "Send".
I could transform from dust
To once again alive

© 2017 Amber Smith



Author's Note

Amber Smith
This is not to be graded. I write in a cathartic manner. Your criticisms are welcome but I am happy with how each and every one of my pieces turns out. Because they are me. Simply me.

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I understand this poem. Easy to release to paper. Hard to discuss.
"If I would just press "Send".
I could transform from dust
To once again alive "
When we publish our work. We show our real skin and thoughts. Thank you Amber for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amber Smith

7 Months Ago

And that is exactly how I feel. Honestly, I never spend more the 5 minutes writing. I just write wha.. read more
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

I write in a similar way. I call it. Flow writing. Yesterday I wrote two poems in 20 minutes. The mi.. read more
Amber Smith

7 Months Ago

Yes exactly. "Flow writing", that's a perfect description.



Reviews

I understand this poem. Easy to release to paper. Hard to discuss.
"If I would just press "Send".
I could transform from dust
To once again alive "
When we publish our work. We show our real skin and thoughts. Thank you Amber for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amber Smith

7 Months Ago

And that is exactly how I feel. Honestly, I never spend more the 5 minutes writing. I just write wha.. read more
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

I write in a similar way. I call it. Flow writing. Yesterday I wrote two poems in 20 minutes. The mi.. read more
Amber Smith

7 Months Ago

Yes exactly. "Flow writing", that's a perfect description.
Ah yes.. So many times have we chosen to not Press Send... I get you in this write. Magnificent Hun.. Happy writing!

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amber Smith

12 Months Ago

Thank you:)
"Juat as I do" is a typo I found in the piece :)

Keep working on your art! I look forward to reading more of your stuff in the future.

Posted 12 Months Ago


Amber Smith

12 Months Ago

Appreciated. But please read the authors note.
J. B.

12 Months Ago

oh. I wasn't grading it like... critically. just based on what I thought of it.

also.. read more

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Amber Smith

St. Petersburg, FL



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