Forget

Forget

A Story by Amber Smith

Perhaps it was a dream, she thought. Perhaps if she pinched herself, she would wake up. But she didn't want to wake up. She wanted to stay in this dream world where none of it had ever happened. She was in a world where she never experienced loss. With every passing moment she was remembering less of that loss, her memories fading ever so slowly. Did she want to remember? At this point she could only recall the pain in her chest. The sinking feeling in her stomach. The tears. Was that pain real if she couldn't even remember who or what she was grieving? The minuscule urge to fight the memory loss was overtaken by how light and burden free she felt. She knew she was letting go of something so utterly important but at this point, she just didn't care. 

© 2017 Amber Smith



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I have been searching through poems and stories to try and get inspiration for my book and this is just an amazing story. I can honestly say that after reading the first few lines that I was hooked and knew I would enjoy reading this. This was very well written and covered a very sensitive topic that was written so nicely that it was beautiful. The question you added into this story of "Did she want to remember?" I loved it, so beautiful and such a deep question that is so relatable at the same time. I loved reading this and can I just say how good your titles are; like yes they are often one worded but just those one words can be exceptionally powerful and draw readers in.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amber Smith

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much! All of my writing comes from a personal place and I just seem to know the title o.. read more



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This is so dimly beautiful. I enjoy your writer's voice and style so much!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amber Smith

3 Months Ago

Thank you again, it truly means the world to me
I have been searching through poems and stories to try and get inspiration for my book and this is just an amazing story. I can honestly say that after reading the first few lines that I was hooked and knew I would enjoy reading this. This was very well written and covered a very sensitive topic that was written so nicely that it was beautiful. The question you added into this story of "Did she want to remember?" I loved it, so beautiful and such a deep question that is so relatable at the same time. I loved reading this and can I just say how good your titles are; like yes they are often one worded but just those one words can be exceptionally powerful and draw readers in.

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amber Smith

5 Months Ago

Thank you so much! All of my writing comes from a personal place and I just seem to know the title o.. read more
Everyone has a moment or moments they want to forget.this is written so that it's relatable to everyone. Thoughtfully well crafted and worth reading

Posted 5 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Amber Smith

St. Petersburg, FL



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