Protector No More

Protector No More

A Poem by Amber Smith

My first memory
Is you in the sunlight
Iridescent and shining
My protector, beautiful

I was put here for one reason
To love you
But that broke
Uncertainty left in its place

Twisted up inside
And lost, without direction
Misguided hate and anger
Just seem to fall flat

I was led to believe
This glowing figure embodied love
And yet here I am
Without you, without light

© 2017 Amber Smith



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Whence light is the compass of ones road, only he illuminates the heart through the windows of our eyes. Oh, but like the moon is your body, who harnesses the light of the Sun to shown the way through the darkness and stars. If light is not present, perhaps sound may guide your way, the sound... of your heart

Posted 2 Months Ago


this feels kind of raw, which is good, I think this is very relate able for everyone at some point in their lives.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love how plain, real and powerful this is. It takes great courage to be without those who we call our "light". Perhaps one must be their own light.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very powerfully written. The beginning sets up the scene for a star-crossed love story, but the rest tells of the tragedy of a failed love and the consequences. You capture the feeling of loneliness/betrayal very well.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amber Smith

2 Months Ago

Thank you very much :)

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Amber Smith
Amber Smith

St. Petersburg, FL



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