Clouds Rolling In

Clouds Rolling In

A Poem by Veratresa
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I was inspired by the rain. :)

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The clouds high, the sky bright

Wind blowing lazily

Clouds darken

Thunder cracks, lightning burns the sky

The storm has come.  


© 2013 Veratresa



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Veratresa
Please let me know what you think. ^.^

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Very precise. Reminds me of the poems of Li Quaing of the late Sung dynasty

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Veratresa

4 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
I'm no authority on poetry, but I like this. Your few, well-chosen words convey both meaning and emotion.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Veratresa

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
Oh this is very well written. I can practically feel the storm coming. I like how abrupt the change is, because it's just like most storms. They come out of nowhere.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Veratresa

4 Years Ago

Thanks so much! I really appreciate it. :D
A beautiful storm! I love how you start out in the clear spring time description. Creates great contrast for when the storm comes. One of the best free verse poems I've read in a while. Great Job. (Ps go fellow writer from Illinois!!)


Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Veratresa

4 Years Ago

Well thank you thats really nice of you! :) Ha mine too. :D
Imara

4 Years Ago

^_^
Veratresa

4 Years Ago

:D
This brings you into the moment, excellent read and write. Love thunderstorms.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Veratresa

4 Years Ago

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it! I also really like thunderstorms. :D
Vividly depicted the storm.
I am feeling the thrust of storm with burns of lightning.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

zainul

4 Years Ago

You are welcome,talented writer. :D
Veratresa

4 Years Ago

Well again thank you. :D
zainul

4 Years Ago

:)

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Tags: Clouds, Storm, Thunder, Lightning

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