I am Not Afraid

I am Not Afraid

A Poem by Morgan A Lynch

 

I am not insane
It is not suppose to be this way
Just want to feel again
 
Darkness lies beneath the surface
Demons pushing there way through the flesh
 
Just need one more day
Before they take me away
A day to smile and laugh
Before it is all taken away
 
My life is falling apart
As time drifts by
 
I am not afraid
Of the pain
 
I am not afraid
That I am not able to stay
 
I am not insane
It is not suppose to be this way
Just want to feel again

© 2008 Morgan A Lynch



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This is pleasantly vague, I must admit. It applies to basically any situation, therefore, the reader can certainly relate to such a poem! The beginning line "I am not insane" reminded me of A7X's "Almost Easy"... sorry, had to throw that out there. ;)

But seriously. This poem and it's urgent tones are very impressive and give off a great emotional appeal to the audience. ^^ Great work!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I understand for I relate... you know the demons that haunt my soul.... I wonder when they will take me away.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Your writing style is all your own, very good share here I enjoyed this one as well Frank :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I love your words , don't afraid from the pain Yossi

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sometime it is hard to see daylight. We must battle a internal struggle to feel human again. I can feel the emotion and desire to make sense of life. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Well this was refreshing to read about such a serious topic....very well written

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can see the torment that fills your being. You do a great job relaying what consumes you. Nicely composed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is pleasantly vague, I must admit. It applies to basically any situation, therefore, the reader can certainly relate to such a poem! The beginning line "I am not insane" reminded me of A7X's "Almost Easy"... sorry, had to throw that out there. ;)

But seriously. This poem and it's urgent tones are very impressive and give off a great emotional appeal to the audience. ^^ Great work!

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I understood every word here! I so can relate to this. Sometimes i want to go, and sometimes i want to stay. It's so hard to go and it's so hard to stay. Brilliant, and beautiful poem!!

B.A.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very well written poem. I can feel this person's life falling apart, yet she's willing to take the pain but not yet not yet. Not sure if i interpreted it right but excellent poem.

Flame

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Morgan A Lynch
Morgan A Lynch

sandbox with cactus, AZ



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I am 24 years old and live in AZ.. I have prob failed every english class that i have taken. I hate to be told what to write and how to do it.. i write from the heart and things that i feel. umm to te.. more..

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