Dreams, keep us going

We sail on through the night, soldiers of fortune, tell the story if you can!

You cross this line,

 every inch of you pushes.

Every push, every scrape, every punch.

Every kick, every drop of my blood,

Pushing the light,

Pushing the man,

Pushing the Comets fire!



Run!!!!

Chase this Light,

Bring the fight,

Every blow will be replied with three,

Every inch will be pushed back!!!!!

CHASE THE COMETS FIRE!!!!



My face shall take the blow,

my chest will take the punch,

my muscles will scream!

Bring the fight to me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THIS LINE WILL NOT BE CROSSED!

THIS DREAM WILL NOT FALL!!

THIS COMET'S FIRE SHALL BURN THE NIGHT'S SKY!!!


Our bodies will burn,

your hands will be bruised and broken,

your muscles will scream,

your limbs will slowly ache...

But my line will not be crossed!!

Your skins will begin to burn,

blister,

wither,
 
fail,

but my dream will still BURN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Note

Flash of comet fire,
coming to find ya,
almost blinded by the light!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

His destiny was clear,
the comet leaves today,
and Eden waits tonight!



Thank you Mr. Clemens

Reviews

[Marcus Walker]

It's really effective by how it draws the reader into the chase. It has a good vibe and pace that takes you into an insane mindset. I thoroughly enjoyed this.

[Soulfulbubbles]

powerful has me wanting to scream with it. glory passion and blistering tenacity gives me a feeling of being beaten to a bloody pulp but still refusing to die or back down

love it!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Powerful!... The dream will continue to burn! Great passion in this piece. Well done!

[cmwelsh]

Very passionate, almost stabs you as you read it. Awesome.

[Emrys Realmskip]

Amazing! i love this alot c: very well written

[Corset]

do you suppose dear we could move the line to the other side of the grill? I'm very hungry after all this fight.

[Wondering Mind]

A sparring session to keep the dream alive..nicely done

[Katrina Mckeown]

a well penned passionate write.

[Renée]

Strong stance ! Hell or high water.. your quite passionate ( ;

[Babe Roxx]

Wow, such passion in your words...and say AMEN To That...dreams will still burn.