Divine Beauty

Dark lashes were curled

and dazzling blue orbs swirled,

Eyebrows were plucked

and her hair behind her ear was tucked.

Her beaming smile was warm and inviting. 

Her heart and soul was purely enticing.

Her blood red lips were supple and thin,

Her curvatures as perfect as a violin. 

She had a strut so wondrous, timed, and consistent... 

One could gaze at her for a lifetime, if one were so persistent,

A face so clear, I dreamt of it. 

Her memory was being redrawn in my memory, bit by bit.

A complexion so wan yet beautifully delicate, 

and to fit all of this, she had such an elegant temperament.

Hazel brown hair cascaded down her back like a rich chocolate waterfall. 

A gaze so entrancing and an acumen so vast... The most beautiful woman of all.

Author's Note

I always rhyme when making a poem...

This week, I mostly wrote things depicting beauty... Huh...

Reviews

[Sofia Brun]

Wow. I thought you were going to have her be dead or something at the end for no apparent reason but, you know, I think I can deal with this.
No really, though. This is good. I adore the fact that you even described the way she had her eyebrows neatly plucked.

[Mother_Yolk]

Everyone expects that from me! I'm not that bad of a person... (although I do admit considering to brutally murdering her in the end. Oops.) Perhaps I'll rewrite this all gory-like and see what I can do. Thank you!

[Sofia Brun]

Yeah, you should make a gory re-write of this or something similar, but keep this because it's also really great.

[Mother_Yolk]

Don't worry, I'll keep this one safe.

[A. Amos]

Hazel brown hair cascaded down her back like a rich chocolate waterfall.
A gaze so entrancing and an acumen so vast... The most beautiful woman of all.

Love the concept and your writing is interesting, love the above ending; will be back to read more of your work..

[Mother_Yolk]

Ah, thank you so much. I appreciate it...

[Chadvonswan]

This was very nice! Not your usual horror/disgusting/gore/death/murder/f*****g weird theme, but it was actually a really nice poem. I was reading it thinking it would end in a brutal matter, but change is good! Nice rhymin', too..!

[Mother_Yolk]

Hahah why thank you! Yes, change is always good...

[Sami Khalil]

A very good write with good descriptions. Bravo

[Mother_Yolk]

Thank you so much (:

[Sami Khalil]

You are wlcome...:).......................