Bittersweet

How did it come to this

 Love is supposed be so sweet

 How do I stay strong when I feel so weak

 How did I last this long

 Something that supposed to be right

 Feels so wrong

 What happened to the love and happiness

 I’m tired of the bullshit; I’m tired of the crappiness

Have you ever been with someone and yet feel loneliness

This relationship should a lifetime but I want to end this

I may not be the best man

 But I’m a good man

 Right now I’ll take a stand

 I want out

 I gave you my heart

 I gave you my all

 It was never good enough

 So now I just don’t even give a f**k

I guess marriage wasn’t for me

So let me go so that I can be free

Reviews

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Passion all i read is Passion

[Razz]

You can really feel the emotion in this piece. I think it is a description of how a lot of people feel. So a lot of people can really relate to this poem. Love really isn't all that sweet, but it sure is a beautiful, beautiful, messy, beautiful thing. Great read, hope to read more.

[AllauraRose]

*snaps* Wow, that was amazing. You not only rhymed but you made your emotions come to life. Love may be sweet at first but sometimes it takes a turn for the worst. I really enjoyed this poem. You are really talented, please write more!