Pure Seduction

This is what came out when a friend asked me to write about pure seduction....... hope you like it......

 

Erotic, exotic, a hint of chocolate

Makes us symbiotic

In our pursuit of love supreme,

But it all started with pure seduction.

 

Past a broken hearts reluctance

And around the corner from needing;

Something-Someone with substance

Down the 1^st alley

At the 15^th back yard find desire.

Enter the house slash sanctuary

Ascend the stairs to find pure seduction.

 

Set deep in the recess’s of your cranium

Two heavily saturated mahogany irises

Gaze and convert light and shadows

Into a mental image of my physique.  

 

Two kindred souls placed in a predicament

To pursue the positive

Power of an attraction seen only

In the periphery of the people.

Leaving us in a state of arousal

On our own intertwined spiritual plane

Ready for pure seduction.

 

  

Reviews

[sheerpoetry]

I like the part @ past broken hearts reluctance. I feel you!

[Brjden (Bridge-Den) Cre..]

I love the rhythm and flow here! You remind me of Philly poetry & spoken word lounges. Very creative and seductive with the right amount of sensuality leaving room for a woman's imaginative intuition. Great descriptions and lyrical wordplay that can leave a lesser mind puzzled....

"Two heavily saturated mahogany irises"

Dope! I'll continue checking for your stuff. You got something going.....

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

I like this piece, much better than the other spoken word one, which got me lost. but this one seemed to flow well, and an idea where attraction starts with lust, but it can manifest into more, and it's "purely seductive" i liked your use of words

Set deep in the recess's of your cranium
Two heavily saturated mahogany irises

(what a great way to describe beautiful eyes...very unique)

thanks for sharing.

Kena

[THE LOST ROSE]

Erotic, exotic, a hint of chocolateMakes us symbioticIn our pursuit of love supreme,But it all started with pure seduction.

I was hook after the first paragraph Great write. Great skills to write about a topic that someone asked you to do. I hope more folks on this site get a chance to read your work. They would really dig your style. Keep writing and posting brother.

[A]

this spoke to me i liked it a lot