Yo ho, yo ho...

Okay, it's just pure silliness but when I saw a contest for Kyrielle form, this was the first thing that popped into my head. BTW, the picture is my brother bein' goofy.

A tempest and a swale

A pretty woman and a tale

Batton the hatches and down below

It's a pirate story, yo ho!

 

Tortuga's just the place

For a captain who's lost face

To gather a crew to join the show

It's a pirate story, yo ho!

 

A dark frigate sails out of the night

A cannon fires and there's a fight

The baudy wenches that you could know

It's a pirate story, yo ho!

 

I'm not sure I did it well
It was fun, so what the hell

I got to think about Jack Sparrow

And a pirate story, yo ho!

Reviews

[J. James Reider]

a quite amusing poem and well written... I thoroughly enjoyed reading it in a gruff voice in my head... lol... to be honest, I really detest pirates, but not in the cartoonish form you depicted them here... thanks for entering this in the contest!

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

LOL! I liked the Jack Sparrow line!
Love All, Mejasha

[L.G. Knight]

Lol this is very cute! Thanks for entering it in the "Silly Rhymes" Contest!

~Frances~

[SPINNING ON that dizzy ..]

I like the rhyme and story here. Of course, I love Depp - so there you go too.... Like the playful nature can almost rock to this as if we are on the ship with you.... I'll play the part of a salty wench! haha..... very clever and visual.... good good

Kath

[B. Lapinski]

Made me smile. I'm half in the bag now so it went very very well.

[James Takeo Panton]

I enjoyed this read! A great feel to a great rhythm....great stuff!