Evolution?

Evolution?

A Poem by MrJodie
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Inspired by, and written for, the Ladder To The Sky contest.

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More created than discovered
the ladder to the sky
Built by more than mortals
those greater than you and I
A vehicle of madness
or brilliance one could say
It calls to all who wonder
and it takes those same away
Could it lead to heaven
or somewhere else entire
You'll have to climb it for yourself
if you wish to truly inquire
The answer will cost you more
than you could possibly give
But without climbing the ladder
you can hardly say you've lived

© 2008 MrJodie


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Excellent write! Thank you for submitting this to the Ladder to the Sky contest. I liked your use of rhyme, and I felt the poem flowed very easily. I liked the way you blended a sense of uncertainty with determination. I look forward to reading more of your writing in the future.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Some journeys are ment to be taken some are not. I liked the journey I took with this poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Kelley Frost

Posted 16 Years Ago



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MrJodie
MrJodie

Troutdale, OR



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I live in Troutdale, Oregon, a suburb of Portland. I'm currently working as a computer systems administrator for a manufacturing company in Vancouver and write only as a hobby. However, I've dreamed.. more..

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