Final Regret

Ever wonder?

God and I got into an argument, yesterday

He was so upset with me

He got up and left the room

He said something about needing to go for a walk

I haven't seen Him since

I'm starting to wonder if He's going to come back

Reviews

[Thomas James Martin]

No belief or non-belief needed. . .
It's the poem, s . . . .
neither liked nor disliked
but is real and real
consciousness

Thanks for sharing and congratulations on winning 1st place in the 50 Words or Less Contest.

Tom

[James K. Blaylock]

I think we've all felt like this at some point, but, I believe He is always right there... if ever we call. Congrats, on the win!

jkb

[Imperfection]

It is a matter of belief; nothing else.
And I'm not a believer.
I also don't think he's going to come back. If I were you, I wouldn't even have regretted it.

Thanks for entering it into my contest.
Loved this piece.

[DarkAngelWriter]

I've felt like this.

:(

Now I'm not religious.

This is good. Sometimes you don't need many words to get your point across. Your writing is always good!

[SM Davis]

Are you sure it was God and not you whose legs were moving?
Loved it!