Carry Me, remix

Carry Me, remix

A Poem by Mr Whiskers
"

Honesty is sometimes golden...

"

Carry me to a place I've not yet seen

Sweep me off my feet

and show me what love can be

Never let my head hang down

or my heart to sink

Allow me to know your hopes

to see your thoughts, to share your dreams

Carry me somewhere you've taken noone else

Let my feet be the first to imprint

upon the sands of you

Tell me what you know, say how you feel

Tell me no lies and believe each word uttered

Take me away

I want you, only this

To be carried into your solitude

that we may share together

What was once an empty place

let me partake of your innermost, your uttermost

Carry me

And when we arrive, lay me down gently

I will tread softly

Please just take me there

© 2008 Mr Whiskers


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Carry me somewhere you've taken noone else

Let my feet be the first to imprint

upon the sands of you


Lovely ~Like a sweet song of love being sung~ utterly romantic

in poetic verse,wonderful,wondeful

THanks for sharing it in the contest

Fran Marie


Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on October 26, 2008

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Mr Whiskers
Mr Whiskers

New Albany, IN



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I'm 22yrs old, a redheaded female living in southern Indiana. I have a 5yr old daughter Ellie and 3yr old daughter Emma, and my life is getting better now that I have returned to the Love of my life. .. more..

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