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Voices


A Poem by Mr_Passin
"
11:00 p.m. the house is dark and I sit here to play away 'til midnight. I cannot tear myself away from my laptop until I poured my emotion out somewhere. And here it is.
"

Voices

 

That single word echoing

through the mind housing this madness

like an angry pinball

set afire

by the miserable deeds come and gone

to haunt me in my wake

and always sleep.

 

The whispers

that slowly deteriorate my

sanity

to break me down

to the sobs of mercy upon the dust

that's all I am by now.

 

Lord, make them stop!

 

The screams!

They pound heavy in my heart,

Until the numb takes me away

from the reality

that is no longer reality

but a parallel madness.

Equal to the bodies

upon which this earth piled

for nothing but worldly gain

that will turn to ash, infinitely.

 

MAKE,

THEM,

STOP!

 

Silence...


© 2009 Mr_Passin



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Author's Note

I poured out my emotion without editing, and here it is, raw and uncut...
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Woah, this was crazy! Bit in a totally good way! Initially, I get the impression you're describing a schizophrenic with serious mental problems, but then I realized..I can totally relate! Does this make me crazy? Perhaps, lol, but I think alot of people lay awake at night because of "voices" in their head; maybe the things we've done or said that we regret, and the brain wont give us any peace.
Great write, well done! (I'm a fan of "raw and uncut").

Posted 2 Weeks Ago

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