The Imagery.

The Imagery.

A Poem by Ardeh
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Credit to Bryan for helping me out with words :D

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I be a pessimist,
trapped in spirals of vacillation.

Assuming words of yours,
to the extent of insecurity.

The Imagery makes me quiver.
Staying up late in fiction,
ponder about worries not worthwhile.

Why am I in disquiet?....



© 2010 Ardeh


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There is a flow of depth in your river of words. Beautifully spoken, bringing alive those feelings of insecurity and despair...

Posted 14 Years Ago


I don't get much of an impression from it, but I think there isn't much faults around here xD I would also think that "Staying up late in ponder" would've been better because it's unwise to recycle words :O

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Ardeh
Ardeh

Singapore, Singapore



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16 year old dude 93' interested in poems and songwriting. ;) love, relationships, life - my favourites and i hope to learn and be inspired here! gonna start puttng up my songs and poems soon! more..

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